Several things have switched around in the aftermath of chapter seven, which is now underway. Page count stands at 122, which is 11 more than previous count on the second draft, hopefully those extra pages are counting toward helping people understand the story and are not just filler material.
I have made attempts to go into a bit more detail this time around, explaining a few things to clarify the plot and clean up any confusion that may arise. I have done (or made an attempt at such anyhow), by incorporating a couple more "point of view" sections, including some not tied with the main characters and antagonists such as at the beginning when we see through President Adam Hunter's eyes while speaking with his State Secretary, then later from a police captain in Italy speaking with his subordinates. By adding in this small extras, it helps tell the story a bit better and allow the reader to (hopefully) see it from all angles.
Looking ahead, the story will start to pick up some as we approach the proverbial "halftime" of the book. Relationships have been established, new ones will be in the making and the main characters begin to knuckle down and kick ass now that problems plaguing them are a thing of the past. Its starting to get exciting, if not a bit emotional, as things make a turn for the better for the characters while a nightmare incarnate may come true. Time shall tell.
Short post from the phone while on break. May have some to add later on today. Adieu.
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